This was a quickwrite at the beginning of the year. I'm not going to make it into anything, but just wanted to share.
All about my Family
By Elle Stackhouse
Sometimes my family can be kind of weird! One time my dad went out dressed like a hillbilly on Halloween just to embarrass me! And one time my mom forgot to take the gas nozzle out of the car and when she drove off she broke it! Even though my family can be embarrassing I still love them!
My family always comes to each others sports!
I need a new title, any ideas?
I like this! I think that this is probably the easiest piece to relate to because I have a very embarrassing family too sometimes. The one thing that I would change is the last line, because it feels like it should be over at the line before it. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty good piece. I like how you have all the events written about in just the one piece. I'm not good with titles either, so I don't have any ideas.
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