Wednesday, April 14, 2010

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Dear readers, this poem is about John Lennon and when he first met his wife, Yoko Ono.
Any comments are fine. p.s. this is for my project.

My Love

I had thought my heart longed
for music,
but the musical harmonies
had left my heart empty.

I felt i was alone.
There was no one I could
divulge my anxieties into.
Know one who knew...

Until Her.

When I saw Her,
I was in complete shock.
She was as beautiful
as the artwork around her.
Artwork that she made.

She is...

My Love.

1 comment:

  1. I like this pome(: I liked how you used my love at the end and that made it all seem really connected. good job!

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