I see the bright sunlight and warmth hitting down on me and many acres. I hear the lullaby of the bugs and beetles songs. I smell the the soft clean air and freshly mowed grass. I feel he breeze blowing my hair and cooling down the angry sun. i feel grass in between my toes. I feel shade and darkness with rays of sun seeping through branches. It is peaceful here.
I want any sort of feedback that comes to your head. Good, bad, anything.
I really likes your piece. It reminded me of calm summer days. My favorite part was I hear the lullaby of the bugs and beetles songs i liked how you said that. Good job!
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